Wednesday, June 7

3 takes

Rustling

when wilting leaves
weather away
like waning smiles

you sit up
shut down
clear away
the dog eared files.

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Bustling

when traffic lights
hit you like speed
and blaring horns

cajole you
construct you
cage you
transport you

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Hustling

not a penny more
not a dollar less
you surrender

rabid smiles
quick handshake
broken promises
checkmate
at

13 comments:

  1. PreronaThursday, June 08, 2006 4:21:00 PM

    v nice. new game?

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  2. shikhaThursday, June 08, 2006 7:32:00 PM

    I love ur style!

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  3. ariaThursday, June 08, 2006 9:14:00 PM

    Kewl. So you are back with a loaded gun!

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  4. Prmod BafnaThursday, June 08, 2006 10:01:00 PM

    Neat!!! Urban takes?! :D

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  5. InkblotFriday, June 09, 2006 1:55:00 AM

    prerona:yes?

    shikha: thanks :)

    aria:hmm, still wondering..

    pb:thanks buddy

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  6. -Poison-Saturday, June 10, 2006 1:47:00 AM

    vicious life :)

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  7. AnonymousSaturday, June 10, 2006 2:24:00 AM

    Very nice.

    And the bold titles made them even better. The titles had a lot of weight.

    The pace has slowed down a bit. You seem relaxed :)

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  8. Nicole BraganzaSaturday, June 10, 2006 2:52:00 AM

    excellent. sharp insights. nicely arranged.

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  9. Nicole BraganzaSaturday, June 10, 2006 2:53:00 AM

    excellent. sharp insights. nicely arranged.

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  10. Russell CJ DuffySaturday, June 10, 2006 4:19:00 AM

    not sure if the pace has slowed down but the quality hasn't changed. neat. cool. good.

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  11. mermaidSaturday, June 10, 2006 7:36:00 AM

    Brilliant! I think you did it on all three takes. Now, can you escape the moment and watch it in slow motion?

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  12. InkblotSaturday, June 10, 2006 11:03:00 AM

    poison: oh yeah :)

    nicole: thank you

    cj: that's reassuring to know!

    bb: perhaps... thanks!

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  13. mermaidSunday, June 11, 2006 8:33:00 AM

    Hey, what does bb stand for?

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