Those last four lines just jumped out. Someone I'm reading was deducing that pretty girls equate to suffering, which is everything between the womb and tomb.
lol The second piece seemed most natural. Nice title too. lol I guess all one has to do is just to sit with a drunkard and wait till he gets totally tipsy and write down what he says. Wouldn't we come up with something on these lines? ;)
Those last four lines just jumped out. Someone I'm reading was deducing that pretty girls equate to suffering, which is everything between the womb and tomb.
ReplyDeleteHe may have killed your story!
okay i kind of lost this one, dimwit that i am... but i like the woos and Os :)
ReplyDeletedoc: yes.
ReplyDeletefools die. and are reborn as pretty girls hopefully.
killing is easy.
aparna:oooooo, oowwwww! :D
OOps I'm wobbly wonky
ReplyDeletekeep weaving .. it won't die..
Superb...loved teh blanks to be filled bu the reader.
ReplyDeleteNeatos.
i will pay the reward for the nefarious villain if you will only tell me who it is.
ReplyDeleteseems interesting but i'm afraid i dont think I got this one ...
ReplyDeletearia: i used to love wobblyman as a kid :)
ReplyDeleteubermensch: vielen dank
cj: I like my secrets :P
prerona: how does it matter, s'long as u read it :D
I like the word play...interesting weave.
ReplyDeletethanks for visitting,
replied to your comment.
lol
ReplyDeleteThe second piece seemed most natural.
Nice title too. lol
I guess all one has to do is just to sit with a drunkard and wait till he gets totally tipsy and write down what he says.
Wouldn't we come up with something on these lines? ;)