tasting what you can't smell
mincing coffee beans with coriander
drinking red colour blind
eating before the kill
beating bubbles that won't burst
dancing to a dead tune
making love to lettuce
lying in bed alone
writing crap
..................................................
elephant
this has got to die
i said this has got to stop
this has got to lie down
with someone else on top
you can keep me pinned
'cause it's easier to tease
but you can't paint
an elephant
quite as good as she ...
(Damien Rice- 9)
Thursday, March 15
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15 comments:
Nice.
:)
writing crap - am guilty of that often :)
and i still love reading YOU.
writing crap :) you think so .. but so many of us can relate to even this .. (I keep writing crap .. all the time ..)
Randomness can be fun! I love the little elephant poem.
Is writing crap a crime? Now that is the question.
ep
woman: thanks :)
P: oh no no no :D
cj: liar!
aria: thank goodness. lol
ep: so my first one was-
guess what I like eating most
a crisp crunchy piece of toast
topped with butter one inch thick
wouldn't you like to have a lick!
and its been ages since I had that...
i like this one.
Smell and red are bold. Something is dying, and I wonder what will grow in its place.
Since when is making love to lettuce a crime?
Random is not crap. crap is not random. Random crap is not crime :)
oh yeah?
and just who are you calling a liar?
stream of consciousness is GOOD.
rebel heart: thank you, was just messing around :)
mermaid: I get scared when you read between the lines!!
doc: if you're not serious then I aint either :D
aradhita: now a mathematician would be flummoxed with that one!
cj: and guess who. lol. and is that not a compliment?? :)
illyria: thats all it ever is usually, for me (though woolf did it differently I'd say- never figured out if there's a construction behind it- method in the madness sort of thing)
ah this is the dose i've been missing out on! you crack me up woman!
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