Rustling
when wilting leaves
weather away
like waning smiles
you sit up
shut down
clear away
the dog eared files.
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Bustling
when traffic lights
hit you like speed
and blaring horns
cajole you
construct you
cage you
transport you
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Hustling
not a penny more
not a dollar less
you surrender
rabid smiles
quick handshake
broken promises
checkmate
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13 comments:
v nice. new game?
I love ur style!
Kewl. So you are back with a loaded gun!
Neat!!! Urban takes?! :D
prerona:yes?
shikha: thanks :)
aria:hmm, still wondering..
pb:thanks buddy
vicious life :)
Very nice.
And the bold titles made them even better. The titles had a lot of weight.
The pace has slowed down a bit. You seem relaxed :)
excellent. sharp insights. nicely arranged.
excellent. sharp insights. nicely arranged.
not sure if the pace has slowed down but the quality hasn't changed. neat. cool. good.
Brilliant! I think you did it on all three takes. Now, can you escape the moment and watch it in slow motion?
poison: oh yeah :)
nicole: thank you
cj: that's reassuring to know!
bb: perhaps... thanks!
Hey, what does bb stand for?
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