Let the music play
Let it hover wickedly - just beyond the reach of your gently awakening senses that slowly, oh so slowly start pricking at those little triggers that you inch towards expectantly. Now drawing back, now letting your feet stick and your eyes glaze in an attempt to disown what it's doing to you...
Lips parted ever so slightly, eyebrows creased, cheeks taut, neck outstretched, breathing uneven, and green swollen vein throbbing louder than those drumbeats rolling in closer and closer. The air curls up, holding its breath and lights recoil as those tantalizing guitar strings threaten to slice right through you, just to see your face light up in manic joy.
And your eyes, your eyes -
Scorching the head into focus ,
Focus on everything else that shouldn't be,
Focus on what you can't see
Move faster and the burden gets lighter
It's your spine speaking now
It's your spirit twitching brighter
It's your muscles coiling tighter
You were never a fighter
but look what its done to you
Mute madness
and goosebumps
You don't need a voice to shout or a mouth to laugh anymore.
Your brain's in tune with the trills
And your skin tingling for sin
Smell the fire, taste the wounds
This time you're going to win
And you'll take it head on and gore right through
and that dark red silk handkerchief
will soak your face
sweeter
stains on the dancefloor
Come let me teach you to tango.
Wednesday, June 21
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18 comments:
'fiery' thats the word which comes to my mind on reading this...superb work!
okay now your in my top ten fav bloggers :)
Gosh this was wild - lush, bursting .. n sticky ! ;)
You have such a way with descriptions. Your protagonist is a madwoman, psychic, seer, killer all in one.
I can't tell who or what is alive, and who or what is inanimate.
ok, but i have got two left feet.
Deadly. Now I will remember this everytime someone mentions Tango ;)
am game..start the music ;-)
Inky, that was brilliantly sensual. Complex mood.
wow. u do it again...
to tango like this...o the pin pricks my feet and the sun blots my eye. i dare not think.
btw the way...
"rape the girl you'll never see
kill the child you'll never be
shoot the man who dared to fight
burn the old women tonight"...
moved me deeply.
ur words ur game.
awesome post.
Your foreshadowing was ever so ambiguous and wonderful.
Sounds like great fun!
tango..wow
Absolute brilliance shines form your intrinsic weave! A typical Inkblot! yaaay ima use that word to describe all things characteristic of your write! :D
aradhita: u gotta burn when u dance
san: am honoured..:)
aria: blood sweat n tears...:P
mermaid: they keep shifting while I try to figure it out...lol
cj: will take the risk, if you do! :D
casablanca: try it honey...and thanks
VP: sure-anytime,time you took a breather :)
prat: your right- it started off completely differently, didn't realise it would pan out quite this way.
manic street preacher: thanks..and try it indoor next time? :)
doc: you have to be there to know- it actually went backwards
sophie: quite!
pb:thank you and will make more mess in future (blots) given the encouragement..:D
how do i enroll? when's the first class? are there any safety measures regarding tinker toed slops with weak ankles? a medical insurance maybe?
send me in a brochure. it's been a while since i was so excited to start something new.
: )
This gave me the chills! And the 2nd to last line (which I first thought was the last) is awesome: stains on the dance floor.. ooooh.
Utterly Romantic! =D
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