Wednesday, June 21

Not in Paris

Let the music play

Let it hover wickedly - just beyond the reach of your gently awakening senses that slowly, oh so slowly start pricking at those little triggers that you inch towards expectantly. Now drawing back, now letting your feet stick and your eyes glaze in an attempt to disown what it's doing to you...

Lips parted ever so slightly, eyebrows creased, cheeks taut, neck outstretched, breathing uneven, and green swollen vein throbbing louder than those drumbeats rolling in closer and closer. The air curls up, holding its breath and lights recoil as those tantalizing guitar strings threaten to slice right through you, just to see your face light up in manic joy.

And your eyes, your eyes -
Scorching the head into focus ,
Focus on everything else that shouldn't be,
Focus on what you can't see

Move faster and the burden gets lighter
It's your spine speaking now
It's your spirit twitching brighter
It's your muscles coiling tighter

You were never a fighter
but look what its done to you

Mute madness
and goosebumps

You don't need a voice to shout or a mouth to laugh anymore.

Your brain's in tune with the trills
And your skin tingling for sin
Smell the fire, taste the wounds
This time you're going to win

And you'll take it head on and gore right through
and that dark red silk handkerchief
will soak your face
sweeter

stains on the dancefloor


Come let me teach you to tango.

18 comments:

Aradhita said...

'fiery' thats the word which comes to my mind on reading this...superb work!

San said...

okay now your in my top ten fav bloggers :)

aria said...

Gosh this was wild - lush, bursting .. n sticky ! ;)

mermaid said...

You have such a way with descriptions. Your protagonist is a madwoman, psychic, seer, killer all in one.

I can't tell who or what is alive, and who or what is inanimate.

Russell CJ Duffy said...

ok, but i have got two left feet.

Casablanca said...

Deadly. Now I will remember this everytime someone mentions Tango ;)

Φ said...

am game..start the music ;-)

Prat said...

Inky, that was brilliantly sensual. Complex mood.

Monami Roy said...

wow. u do it again...
to tango like this...o the pin pricks my feet and the sun blots my eye. i dare not think.
btw the way...
"rape the girl you'll never see
kill the child you'll never be
shoot the man who dared to fight
burn the old women tonight"...
moved me deeply.
ur words ur game.
awesome post.

... said...

Your foreshadowing was ever so ambiguous and wonderful.

Sounds like great fun!

che sara sara said...

tango..wow

Prmod Bafna said...

Absolute brilliance shines form your intrinsic weave! A typical Inkblot! yaaay ima use that word to describe all things characteristic of your write! :D

Inkblot said...

aradhita: u gotta burn when u dance

san: am honoured..:)

aria: blood sweat n tears...:P


mermaid: they keep shifting while I try to figure it out...lol

Inkblot said...

cj: will take the risk, if you do! :D

casablanca: try it honey...and thanks

VP: sure-anytime,time you took a breather :)

prat: your right- it started off completely differently, didn't realise it would pan out quite this way.

Inkblot said...

manic street preacher: thanks..and try it indoor next time? :)

doc: you have to be there to know- it actually went backwards

sophie: quite!

pb:thank you and will make more mess in future (blots) given the encouragement..:D

perky pink pirate said...

how do i enroll? when's the first class? are there any safety measures regarding tinker toed slops with weak ankles? a medical insurance maybe?
send me in a brochure. it's been a while since i was so excited to start something new.

: )

EATING POETRY said...

This gave me the chills! And the 2nd to last line (which I first thought was the last) is awesome: stains on the dance floor.. ooooh.

no name said...

Utterly Romantic! =D