Its a night of no memories. No stars. No moon. No gloom.
Not even thought.
My tobacco lies quietly in the corner waiting for the pipe to wake.
A satiated wine hush in the air. The breeze sleeps.
A tiny cricket taps a tender beat to the silence.
The neighbour's tap trickles lazily.
Sky wrapped up in cloudy duvet floats dreamless.
The window wilts, weaves wispy words that melt into a whitewashed wall.
No light. No fight. No shadow anymore.
The pensive pen meanders, stops short and gently shuts the door.
Its time to let them be. Its time to set you free.
.
.
I rest my case.
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16 comments:
Inky..this is an awesome post...
It's time to let them.Its time to set you free...:)
Your posts border between reality and a dream...which makes your churn...keep posting!!
Sometimes wry .. sometimes elliptical .. you continue to amaze with inventive twists.
Beautiful!! The way you described it made me feel as if i was there sometime..
>>inkblot: how long before i get accustomed to this void?
shikha: thanks for this and your other comments on earlier posts. appreciate it.
though I have to say I rarely remember dreams and mostly nothing's real...:P
pb: I bet you have or will soon!
bohemian: 'surrender to the void'...:D
tat was just simple yet f**kin awesome
hey nice written yaar...
*nothingness* :) nicely captured!
p.s. The deed is done, and now I must say over and out ;)
It's eerie and peaceful at the same time. This can be read as a suicide note of final release, or deep meditation in final release just before a deep sleep.
Clever alliteration, Inks.
One hell of a post! Wah! :)
sophie: thank you lady
suri: thank you sir
aradhita in'deed', thanks!
mermaid: you know how I can't resist alliterations!
misty: keep dreaming :)
blue athena: thanks, and am inspired to read more vedic philosophy post your post :)
hey inky,
its just so perfect, the monsoons, the purple in your post, the post itself.
"The pensive pen meanders, stops short and gently shuts the door."
love that. so surreal. reminds me of prevet.
i have been absent. sorry. this is such a good piece. lovely to watch your ever changing styles as they evolve into something new and different.
prat, cj: thanks. always nice to have you here.
Now, this is good. In the mood. Yes, rest.
It appears to me that you have a good blog here with some good writing. Glad to have discovered it.
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