Watch it settle on your window pane like it had always been there
Staring wide eyed at you in transparent pleasure
Watch it tremble just a shade
As it holds on tight with baby fingers
Watch it stick its nose on the cool flat glass - beckoning you
Watch it glow.
Watch it wish away the world outside till it's lost in wet white haze
and then
watch it weep for every blow you drew
watch it laugh at every dream you grew
watch it spit out every thought you knew
watch it
reach you
teach you
beseech you
watch it
watch it watching you.
12 comments:
you are already beckoning the rains...and we just started with summer...damn neat though :)
That apart, after tussling with the monster (read exams) I am now back to my valiant (read lazy) self :) And I am now justling out this force of inertia within me to keep me moving ;)
This is both haunting and sportive. They've been watching me constantly for the last month.
nice .. :)
Wow. I saw the end coming before I got there. That's what's neat about this one.
'Watch it watching you.'
very nice.
aradhita: summer needs a bath- can't handle too much sun!
doc: they are good company..sometimes.
san: thanks
mermaid: you did? I must be getting reallyt predictable or your reading me too well :P
sd: welcome and thanks
this was really beautiful! lived the pic too!
love the rains, I think we can go on and on about rains without gettin tired...beautiful...it rained here for a few days, inspired us all and now it is playin hide-&-seek!
very poignant
prerona: thank you. waiting for your next piece.
yashita:the rains, the rains....sit by the window and while the hours away :)
cj: good to know your around
advvant ltd: thank you, and let us into yours
Stop staring at me, you pervvs.- Raindrop
On a more umm, mature note, that was a wonderful creative. Loved every word of it. Think I'm gonna up your link on my blog in a day or two. If you don't mind, that is.
Stop staring at me, you pervvs.- Raindrop
On a more mature note, that was a wonderful creation. Loved every word of it. Think I'm gonna up your link on my blog in a day or two. If you don't mind, that is.
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