You could
if you thought hard
real hard
and coaxed and cuddled the words into
a cushioned cocoon of cadence
cool creamy comforting
crackling now and then like crisp chocolate
cornucopia captured
cosily
in my chaotic cannister
of casual kitsch
callous caress?
no
cliched kiss perhaps
or
crunching candy?
kicking cadavers down the corridoor
call it crazy?
and if you wrote it all down
you could be me.
Wednesday, June 14
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Crazy? Sure, it is :)
Haha! Definitely crazzzzy :D
woohoo inkblot... enjoyed my trip to your world of words... still havent read the whole blog but really liked what i saw...
ps: thanks for stopping by...
: )
My..My lady...wild and free..that's what your heart is:)
This was heady .. both intimate and bizarre .. :)
CASABLANCA: 'we're never gonna survive unless we are a little crazy..' :)
pb: stop laughing! this is s'posed to be serious stuff :P
sunayna: nice to have you here. thanks and keep reading :D
shikha: thank you m'lady
aria: intimate IS bizarre and always heady! lol
That is some alliteration!
Nice! :))
Turn on the bright! This is a version of a chameleon carousel I can suscribe to.
crazy? or c-crazy? ..
great way u play wid words...
jus dropped by.
peace..!!
\m/
blue athena: thanks. love 'literations :)
doc: will get off the carousel when someone does actually write me a miracle.
manic street preacher:thank you. maniacs always welcome :D
cool aliteration even if it felt as though you were talking at me. paranoia is everywhere i guess.
I like your use of aliteration...specially,"a cushioned cocoon of cadence" and the sound of "crackling now and then like crisp chocolate".
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