I love it when you fight me
I love it when you bite
I love it when you hate me
And it happens every night.
I hate it when you touch me
I hate it when you cry
I hate it when you tell me
You will never ever lie.
Will love it if you burn me
Will hate it if you don't
Will love it if you throw me out
So please don't say you won't.
So I'm waiting here
For one good kick
Love it, hate it
Take your pick!
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17 comments:
Loved the last two stanzas more...
Think it's because they don't have "I"
... they sound more like you too.
Hey, that's pretty good!! :-)
Yeah, waiting here for one good kick!
I like the first stanza.
effortless rhyme in this one...
...so wen do we get started?!? ;)
Love or hate it... Love the absence of moderation. Take it or leave it.
soul circling: A- ha.....thanks
omni: thanks a bunch
aparna: kicking back can be fun too.
sg: indeed? I'm no masochist.
bohemian: any day now...:)
doc: middle ground doesn't work for me.
nice easy flow..thats what strikes one first in this one, I think...and then it is wonderfully stating the 'me' in 'my' way :)
cool :)
lved the first 2 para's - they were really good!
The envelop of uncompromising hate? Trial by fire eh :)
this is the angry, bruised, hurt and spiteful inky that we all love.
spiting venom and with talons extended.
lovely!!!
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