Calm today.
Like a wave too lazy to roll
Like a bell too full to toll.
Calm, like a breeze that's sleeping
Calm, like the dew that's weeping.
Every sense, every pore
Quiet now, can't ask for more
Every breath now feels so sweet
Resting now, those restless feet.
Nothing black, no empty street
Just a warm deep heartbeat.
Close as hell, a soft deep shell
that binds and soothes and keeps me well.
Nothing uttered, nothing lost
No hurt, no fear, no thorns, no frost.
So calm now, like the big blue sky
So calm that I would never cry
I know not if I live or die
Calm
And won't you ask me why?
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20 comments:
Good. Both cause and effect.
And why?
J.A.P.
picture perfect. beautiful. measured scientific precision and perfect flowing singing lyrical ... just perfect :)
if any confusion catch me on gtalk for clarification ;)
why?
:)
Very calm. How can I not like it! Loved it. Opens very well. And, not something you expect here.
Why? :p
JAP: cause and effect? you've lost me.
P: clear :)
Aparna: catch me when you can
SS: being cheeky are ya? keep guessing.
I would read this on a particular day when I am feeling depressed...very nice job.
Calm - as though no further eruption will follow...not! A fantastic piece.
Thanks for visiting the Hollywood Art. Unfortunately there's no easy way to visit the content for specific people - I wish blogger allowed for that. What I'm currently trying to do is expand the archive in as many different directions as possible. Watch for many more posts in the very near future on a lot of the golden oldies.
sinusoidally:thats a nice thought. perhaps I will too :)
Nick: thanks, will keep a lookout for more on yours.
As for mine, this could as well be the calm before the storm...
An unusual calm in the tempest... Lyrically imbued tranquility. It's a bit eerie here.
Inks, I won't ask why, because I know. When you can wake up from the stifling thoughts, you feel the serenity stretch beyond the "deep blue sky". It's like watching the Wizard of Oz, and seeing that little man behind the curtain. It's you.
ok, why?
just glad to see peace at last even if the storm breaks.
ok, why?
just glad to see peace at last even if the storm breaks.
This is so peaceful with such lovely imagery..bliss!
:)
ooops...looks like blogger swallowed my previous comment!
This has such vivid and peaceful imagery..enjoy :)
Hmm .. is that why .. you aint writing n posting as much as you normally do ?? :) @ calm..
Lovely one again ..
Ô¿Ô : you want eerie don't you? jeepers creepers comin up on you..sometime.
Mermaid: YOU are a wizard.
Yes, the curtain bit, in brief spells...
CJ: its coming
Pincushion:this one goes easier on the nerves then?
Aria: you don't want the floodgates to open!
wow !
Simply beautiful
You should publish your work
LOL
Keep the good posts coming !!!
beautifully calm.
:)
cudnt comment d same day due 2 some word verification error..well it was nice readn ur poem..cos it was my bday wen dis was posted..n i just felt d same as in d poem...so damn gud...;)
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