Thursday, March 23

For no one

Thought I'd try my hand at love poetry for a change!

Something bright,
Just a trifle trite
I think I might
Just feel right.

And what would I write?

About that first unexpected kiss
That look I often miss
That soft eloquent touch
Silence, that said so much.

The laughter and the light
The frolic and the fight
The warm deep glow
As we merged soft and slow.

Stop.
Right now.
You don't know how.

You never did.
So drop the lid.

And speak no more
Of that mask you wore
That flame you bore

as no one's whore.

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

apt rhymin...;)

: M : said...

full of cliche, but quite different from what you usually offer :)

esp liked the line 'as we merged soft and slow'

good, good.

aria said...

heh @ as no one's whore

Everything rhymed & made sense too!

Anonymous said...

nice one there :)

Anonymous said...

Liked "Remember" and "Serene" (this is diff than ur normal wrks..like it that way) on S.Bloodless.

mermaid said...

'You never did.
So drop the lid.

And speak no more
Of that mask you wore
That flame you bore

as no one's whore'

A fraud caught in the act of stealing something she/he never owned.

Ain't it the truth.

ninetieschild said...

hmm.

Inkblot said...

Aria, caffeine addict, cherie, 1$saint, VP: thanks again

mermaid: what was that song..'I'm looking through you..'

Anonymous said...

Starts well. The first line should probably have been before the title or at the end. Took the title away.

Not sure of the ending here.

Inkblot said...

icy highs:now what does that mean? thanks for dropping by though...and interesting blogs you've got there. will read more soon.

SG: yeah, should have thought of that, too late now!

Russell CJ Duffy said...

what the fuch does hmm mean? jeezus wept.
love poem maybe but still with a mules kick.