Swirls of thick rich cream, with a hint of chocolate now and then.
Scraping the bottom to savour the last vestiges of what could soon be a fond fading memory, even as greedy hunger gnaws for more.
Words form slow and tentative, strung together in serious quest of elusive thought.
Or clear deliberate, like the moon burning a torch for the late night runner on a mission.
Spoken in earnest, now in jest or even in soft childlike wonder as the gutteral wise man awakens the wide eyed questioning infant, purring in pleasure at a brand new touch.
Sounds of lava flowing - deep, quiet anger. The world turns cold with fear till suddenly, magic stirs. Hear the birds chirping on a thawing green as that precious laughter stumbles out in happy abandon from throaty recesses one yearns to fathom.
That wine drenched tone,
The whispered moan
Is it tender plum, cracked blueberry
Or a ripening radiant red red cherry?
Clinking gold coins, rustling leaves
Or cool waves raging on summer eves?
Bronze, bright, bathed in blue
So familiar, ringing true
And right now
as I think of you
Its orange.
Your voice.
Alive, always. I hear it.
Monday, May 15
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13 comments:
nice. specially the end.
been feeling immeasurably sad today - dont know why
Liked the way it ended. Especially the last seven-eight lines.
Not sure about the beginning. Felt a bit aloof as I was reading it. But felt closer and closer as it flowed on.
aloof my arse.
damn fine writing.
The way you conjure such colors and details and feelings.
I'm still dizzy.
Simply wonderful ..
hey inkblot, are u immensely fond of colors?
...i am...so it was fun savouring this scrumptious treat for my senses :)
its glad 2 b bak bloggin...n esply read numerous posts by u...;)
keep it goin
Is CJ's arse really aloof? Somehow I don't think so.
I enjoyed this prose.
This is just beautiful. :)
Prerona: thanks. hope you feel better today.
individualist: thanks. thats useful feedback.
cj: don't be kind. On second thought...
mermaid: you spin me right round too...
aria: thanks honey
bohemian: oh yes I am, and its ages since I heard anyone use 'scrumptious' (my mum's favourite word!)...:D
1$ saint: thanks, I'll try..:)
doctor filth: I enjoyed your comment! Thanks.
blue athena: thanks
soul circling: now that's an interesting observation, though I was thinking of the kumquat orange..
That wine drenched tone,
The whispered moan
Is it tender plum, cracked blueberry
Or a ripening radiant red red cherry?
Alliteration par excellence.
Sweet and lovely..is the taste of this poetry...
If you could,
Hold it tightly..for its melting my heart!
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