Nothing new, nothing here
Nothing sparkles, nothing near.
The rain
It washes out the softness
Leaves me dry and flaky
The sun
It steals away the madness
Leaves me numb yet shaky.
The curling dawn shuts every door
the dusk will never open,
And the days have left me far behind
to fade out in this den.
And things could change
Yes, things may change
and things will change....but when?
16 comments:
Gosh, u write what I feel at present..exactly what I feel actually...in fact I feel it so much that I don't feel like writing about it..
yet, I might even have a clue to the answer...when you stop waiting for things to change and start changing them yourself...maybe then...
very beautifully written.and the change will happen soon enuf. i think they happen wen u want them real bad
You have a beautiful view!
Lovely. I could look out till then :D
aradhita, ouytlaw. sg: thanks
I don't know, Inks. It pains me to see you as a shriveled prune, when your words paint a beautiful spirit who is just thirsty. Maybe I can offer something to drink, but I know it will never fill you.
I liked the pattern to this. Lack of change would be nightmarish. I guess change is a constant... if that makes sense.
Love the positive note at the bottem: things will change. Sounds like you're in the dolrums, but yes things will change... they already have, the fact that you posted this.
and things will change....but when?
Yes a question that is best answered from within !!!
I guess whenever you are ready for the change
what say ?
you are not looking hard enough or maybe you are looking too hard. things have already changed. YOU have changed.
might never give us what we want. cruel life. you deal blows with those innocent and splendid. you toy with those who live to admire. its the fate of some lives to endure pain, and others to profit from our defeat
yeah when??
echoes my very own feelings ..
beautiful again ..
you have something for almost every mood ..
and things will change....but when?
when you least expect them to.. just like the tone of your writing does :)
yeah, things will change...but when??
this question haunts me too..
i guess you (and me too!) should stop wanting and waiting for change to happen. stop expecting change. it'll happen (for better or for worse) when it has to happen.
WoW! I'llnever take a picture again! Did you get my message?
mermaid: oops- do I sound like a shrivelled prune? will drink lots of water henceforth...:)
and its always nice to have you hear, so keep coming around with a big jug of whatever!
cj: well, well...if you say so.:D
death: "always look on the bright side of life"...:)
aria: thanks, will try and think of a few more.
san: thanks honey, I like that.
Doc: thanks. Cannot do without change. Its what makes me tick!
Eating poetry: that makes sense. Thanks.
Ajay: sounds good. :)
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