Friday, February 17

Chuckle

You don't want me
You don't need me
You don't care

I want you
I need you
I care.

Tell me I'm wrong if you dare.

12 comments:

Aradhita said...

And that makes you chuckle??

EATING POETRY said...

I love this poem. It's sweet and short. Stupid person who doesn't want you.

The Individualist said...

What's the point wanting, needing and caring about it when the other one cares for neither of those?

San said...

i'm with you on this one

GhostOfTomJoad said...

Yeah, why chuckle?

Emotions said...

Nice poem.....i must say......
gr8 poets !! gr8 poems !!

all d bst !!
keep writing n keep smiling :-)

Anonymous said...

Reciprocation not required. Think about it.

Swetha said...

You can feel free to tell what you feel but that would be in vain when the other doesn't reciprocate to that

another illusion said...

all this wanting, needing and caring can leave you feeling so damn miserable if all of it is not reciprocated.

feelings are so illogical that its suffocating at times...

Inkblot said...

eating poetry: that makes me feel grand

individualist:2+2 doesn't always =4 you know, and does there have to be a point?

ph:see above. perhaps thats why I'm chuckling.

aradhita, ghostoftomjoad :see above, and hey, whoever said this was about me? (still chuckling)


illusion: what would we do without them though..

emotions,sweta,sangeeta:thanks

Anonymous said...

Then tell me
before it's
too late
waiting
and you know who "I"am

Anonymous said...

How can i chuckle
Like you do
I dare you to need me
I dare you to want me
Tell me
It's upto YOU